Cool, moment snapshot poem. Anticipation.
Its nice! draws a nice picture.
wow; splendid imagery; like photography of a moment but capturing so much more!
And it's damn hot...Nehi Orange sounds so good right now.
The language really moves! This is as terrific as I remember all of your poems. Nice compression of imagery throughout.
reminds me of my own childhood,except it was an ice cream cone we were going after...
I love this one.