Click click, can hear the ticking in the poem, Tina. Brilliant.
I could hear this read to a loud ticking, Tina. Maybe a metranome?
"sun shines on monoliths" so beautiful an image!
missed you! glad to see you back again, bringing the lines you scribbled on the cell wall, next to those pesky pin-up birthdays...
Very nice compacted and contrasting imagery. Great poem!
wonderful! Tina, i've read this one more than any of your others. every time i visit this site, this is the one i want to read. ~Mel